张老师，这个你那个阅读课里面第十二篇文章。关于是不是细节我处理出了点问题，文章第三段，第一句是k仔细检查了失业模型。第二句是他发现了失业率因阶级而异。第三句是但是这特定阶级内部的失业率影响也不同。第四句即使是在同一个trade里，失业率也不同，confirm里前一句。第五局k用these differential rates 去帮助解释困惑历史学家的现象，这里为什么不是下层细节呢？这句话核心语义是在于“用他的结论去做了件什么事”，并不影响主旨“他的这个结论是什么？”？第六句“但是mobility 不是主要的工人策略”，这里不知道mobility是什么，就返回上一句去看，看见出现在上一句，就觉得在解释上面下沉细节里面的内容是细节转折也就跳了这句。最后一句说的是自救，切入角度小，不读。所以根本没有读出作者在这里还对k怼了一句。这样处理不可以吗？但就是由于这样处理，也就没有读出最后一句前半部分为什么要说尽管还要花很多时间发展应用，这里就没有扣上。。。但实在不懂怎么知道那里就要去读了，感觉有点后面逻辑没有连得上，所以再说服自己该回去读那里的感觉，第一遍读的时候根本对这里没有感觉是逻辑转到了在说他的结论的应用。

Scientists have observed large concentrations of heavy-metal deposits in the upper twenty centimeters of （Baltic Sea sediments, which are consistent with the growth of industrial activity there）. (A) Baltic Sea sediments, which are consistent with the growth of industrial activity there (B) Baltic Sea sediments, where the growth of industrial activity is consistent with these findings (C) Baltic Sea sediments, findings consistent with its growth of industrial activity (D) sediments from the Baltic Sea, findings consistent with the growth of industrial activity in the area (E) sediments from the Baltic Sea, consistent with the growth of industrial activity there 这题答案是D，但是觉得D的表达很不高效，当时就排除了。Review也没太看明白，请老师讲解一下

In recent years cattle breeders have increasingly used crossbreeding, (in part that their steers should acquire certain characteristics) and partly because crossbreeding is said to provide hybrid vigor. (A) in part that their steers should acquire certain characteristics (B) in part for the acquisition of certain characteristics in their steers (C) partly because of their steers acquiring certain characteristics (D) partly because certain characteristics should be acquired by their steers (E) partly to acquire certain characteristics in their steers 看到划线后的and就想到平行，然后就错选了D，答案是E，不理解为什么，请老师讲解一下。谢谢！

In a state of pure commercial competition, there would be a large number of producing firms, all unfettered by governmental regulations, all seeking to meet consumer needs and wants more successfully than each other. A.all seeking to meet consumer needs and wants more successfully than each other B.all seeking more successfully to meet consumer needs and wants than the others C.each seeking to meet consumer needs and wants more successfully than one another D.each seeking to meet consumer needs and wants more successfully than the others E.each seeking more successfully to meet consumer needs and wants than another C和D到底怎么判断啊？

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[The ability of scientists to provide models of the atmosphere's complex responses to changing conditions, like seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary conjunctions, have become ever more accurate.] A The ability of scientists to provide models of the atmosphere's complex responses to changing conditions, like seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary conjunctions, have become ever more accurate. B The ability of scientists has become ever more accurate in providing models of the atmosphere's complex responses to changing conditions, such as seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary conjunctions. C Scientists have become able to provide ever more accurate models of the atmosphere's complex responses to such changing conditions as seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary conjunctions. D Scientists have become ever more accurate in their ability for providing models of the atmosphere's complex responses to changing conditions, like seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary conjunctions. E Scientists' ability to provide models of the atmosphere's complex responses to such changing conditions as seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary conjunctions have become ever more accurate.

问题： 1. 听了老师的中文作文思路，但不知道该怎么转化成英文 2. 每个点要先概括说一下是什么问题吗？ 3. 作文主体部分要分段吗？ 如果点比较多怎么分？