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题目:

Five hundred million different species of living creatures have appeared on Earth, nearly 99 percent of them vanishing.

选项:

A、Five hundred million different species of living creatures have appeared on Earth, nearly 99 percent of them vanishing.
B、Nearly 99 percent of five hundred million different species of living creatures that appeared on Earth have vanished.
C、Vanished are nearly 99 percent of the five hundred million different species of living creatures that appeared on Earth.
D、Of five hundred million different species of living creatures that have appeared on Earth, nearly 99 percent of them have vanished.
E、Of the five hundred million different species of living creatures that have appeared on Earth, nearly 99 percent have vanished.

答案:

E

提问:

请tina老师解答 A.我觉得这个语义不对,原文的语义是说99%的消失了,而a选项里面把99%的消失作为修饰语放在后面,所以不对 B.这个选项在语法上和语义上面都没有找到问题 C.用了一个倒装,但是语法和语义好像也没有什么问题,就是显得有点复杂,是不是可以理解为倒装就是用来强调它的消失? D.这个里面用了两个of,好像有点复杂,有点多余 E.把of的内容放在了前面,避免了头重脚轻 ,但是我不确定把它放在前面语法上是不是对的?

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SC 选项A的问题?

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提问:

觉得B好,B直接把主语百分之99的物种来了,而E绕了两下,又有of又有百分之99,雾里不知道主语是谁 时态也认为是B好,B中是appeared,have vanished,感觉两个动作在时间上有区分,语义是:过去存在的,现在灭绝了。但是E中两动作都是现代完成时态,觉得语义和B相比,时态不对。

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提问:

排除ABC E 多个the 特指,感觉奇怪 D 多个 of them,清楚,也没有the 选D 正确答案E

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提问:

还是在BE对比方面,我做题的时候思路如下: 排除了其他的选项,剩下BE,第一次做的时候,觉得E中的“the”让语义感觉更准确,明确了就是这500个物种中99%消失。 但是还有另外一个区别迷惑了我:B中是appeared,have vanished,感觉两个动作在时间上有区分,语义是:过去存在的,现在灭绝了。但是E中两个动作没有区分,觉得语义和B相比,有些不精确。 我觉得在考场上我可能不能察觉到E更利于读者理解这个问题,请老师指正。谢谢。

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