王文静老师，我这道题目不知道要不要用你上课教的补充完整的方法，than是可以补的，但是exceed我就不清楚了，我说一下我的思路 a.rates 不能和other immigrant group去比 b.如果直接看的话，rates 不能和immigrant group 比。但是我如果补足的话，mideast immigrants are exhiting rates of entrepreneurship exceeding virtually every other immigrant group (do) in the...就是主语比较 c.直接看的话rates 对those是对的，但是!上课主谓宾比较第一道例题题目的c选项是错误的，它是这样的:wild animals have less total fat than that of livestock fes on grain and have more fat of a kind thought to be good for cardiac health,错误原因是than后面补全的话就是wild animals have that of livestock逻辑错误。这道题目c选项补全immigrants from the mideast exhibit rates of entrepreneurship exceeding (immigrants from the mideast exhibiting ) those of virtually every other immigrant group in the increasingly diverse united states economy..不是不对吗，我觉得这两道题的c好像啊 D.同B的错误 E.谓语动词单复数错误 请老师帮忙解答一下，谢谢！到底要不要补全，还是直接简单看看就好，到底c为啥在这道题目对，以前的例题又错

Scientists have observed large concentrations of heavy-metal deposits in the upper twenty centimeters of （Baltic Sea sediments, which are consistent with the growth of industrial activity there）. (A) Baltic Sea sediments, which are consistent with the growth of industrial activity there (B) Baltic Sea sediments, where the growth of industrial activity is consistent with these findings (C) Baltic Sea sediments, findings consistent with its growth of industrial activity (D) sediments from the Baltic Sea, findings consistent with the growth of industrial activity in the area (E) sediments from the Baltic Sea, consistent with the growth of industrial activity there 这题答案是D，但是觉得D的表达很不高效，当时就排除了。Review也没太看明白，请老师讲解一下

In recent years cattle breeders have increasingly used crossbreeding, (in part that their steers should acquire certain characteristics) and partly because crossbreeding is said to provide hybrid vigor. (A) in part that their steers should acquire certain characteristics (B) in part for the acquisition of certain characteristics in their steers (C) partly because of their steers acquiring certain characteristics (D) partly because certain characteristics should be acquired by their steers (E) partly to acquire certain characteristics in their steers 看到划线后的and就想到平行，然后就错选了D，答案是E，不理解为什么，请老师讲解一下。谢谢！

In a state of pure commercial competition, there would be a large number of producing firms, all unfettered by governmental regulations, all seeking to meet consumer needs and wants more successfully than each other. A.all seeking to meet consumer needs and wants more successfully than each other B.all seeking more successfully to meet consumer needs and wants than the others C.each seeking to meet consumer needs and wants more successfully than one another D.each seeking to meet consumer needs and wants more successfully than the others E.each seeking more successfully to meet consumer needs and wants than another C和D到底怎么判断啊？

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想問下7月23要考試，已經上過面授，現在應該怎麼復習呢？

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[The ability of scientists to provide models of the atmosphere's complex responses to changing conditions, like seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary conjunctions, have become ever more accurate.] A The ability of scientists to provide models of the atmosphere's complex responses to changing conditions, like seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary conjunctions, have become ever more accurate. B The ability of scientists has become ever more accurate in providing models of the atmosphere's complex responses to changing conditions, such as seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary conjunctions. C Scientists have become able to provide ever more accurate models of the atmosphere's complex responses to such changing conditions as seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary conjunctions. D Scientists have become ever more accurate in their ability for providing models of the atmosphere's complex responses to changing conditions, like seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary conjunctions. E Scientists' ability to provide models of the atmosphere's complex responses to such changing conditions as seasonal and daily cycles or different planetary conjunctions have become ever more accurate.

问题： 1. 听了老师的中文作文思路，但不知道该怎么转化成英文 2. 每个点要先概括说一下是什么问题吗？ 3. 作文主体部分要分段吗？ 如果点比较多怎么分？