Sentence Correction
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题目：
Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.
选项:
A、Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.
B、Over the course of the eighteenth century a tripling in the average output of ironwork was due to the replacement of charcoal by coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, in addition to several improvements in blowing machinery.
C、With charcoal's being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century.
D、The replacement of charcoal with coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century.
E、Charcoal being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, and several improvements in blowing machinery, which tripled the average output of ironwork over the course of the eighteenth century.
答案:
A
提问：
请tina老师解答
A.as a result of和because不是很平行，但是语法和语义上也没有问题
B.我感觉这个是对的，in addition to后面the several improvement和 due to后面的the replacement平行，请问这个哪里有问题呢？另外a tripling was due to也是对的吧？
C.with being done这个句型感觉啰嗦,
不对
D.这句话前面加一个With是不是就对了？
E.少谓语动词
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提问：
错选了C。
我首先排除B，B整体都很奇怪，in additional to不等于and，而表示除了XX之外另一个完全不相关的事，改变句意。
D是句子不完整，fragment，缺个连词
E同上，句子没写完
A和C之间PK。我杀掉A是因为觉得A里as a result of XXXXX and because XXXXX，as a result 和because不是重复了吗？ C我把with当作“以”来理解，觉得说得通，不太明白错在哪儿了。
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